Hey Eskoz, nice to see your artwork again! First off, I really like the new scene! Very sexy once again.
I wanna offer a few points of quick criticism and personal preference (I'm aware that the vaginal part was your focus). The movement of her wrist looks a bit uncomfortable because of the extreme angle. Also if her arm (the one she is holding him with) would touch the side of her torso and/or rest on her thigh, I think it would put less strain on her shoulder and look more natural. The insertion-depth feels a little bit shallow to me, he could have been put in a bit further. I would also like a bit of gradual resistance (friction) the further he goes in because it would make her seem less "loose". I also feel like the elasticity of her vaginal lips could be a bit softer and have a little bit less grip on the inserted, so they "glide off" his body and don't snap back as suddenly. Might make them feel a bit softer overall. Please don't take my criticism to heart. I'm not complaining, just felt the urge to point these out after, uhm, meditating over your wonderful work for a while...
Criticism is always welcome. I agree with most of your points and some of them I've noticed myself as well. The hands extreme angle particularily was something that caught my eye but I didn't bother to fix it as that would have ment redoing a lot of the animations on the vagina, which was the most time consuming part of this clip. And spot on on the arm position. I didn't really even notice it since I was working through a camera angle where it doesn't show that much.
Insertion depth would have required a different hand pose, as the hand is already clipping with the vagina slightly when close to it. But yes, it would definitely be better with a deeper insertion. I should have probably gone with a pincer grip or something.
As for the friction, I'm not sure if I agree completely on the loose feel, I'd prefer to think that she's just wet. Having said that, having more friction might be more interesting visually. Not to mention the snap back on the ending kind of makes the vagina feel a bit sticky/dry. Although it also gives it a more tight feeling.
I was going for a kind of cartoonish feel on the snap back of the lips. Kind of like in cartoons when characters kiss and the lips stretch and then when parting they immediately snap back to the face, sometimes even propellin the character backwards. Obviously I didn't exagerate the effect nearly that much though, but that was the thought process there. I feel there would have been a lack of impact if the lips just fell slowly back, but this is probably a matter of preference.
Hopefully I didn't come across too defensively, I do appreciate the criticism.
#2 I really like this, and i like what you did with the slight exaggeration for a "cartoony" sort of look as you put it. To me it gives the girl the look of being sort of an innocent girl just having fun and probably not really realizing that her little plaything may not be enjoying this all that much. I like it.
#3 I really hope you decide to do a longer animation with this, show a nice extended scene where she uses her little dildo then tucks it away inside her.
#4 I do like the tiny woman as opposed to the tiny man, i hope you do a F/F version as well ;)
#5 posted a comment right before this, realized there was more i wanted to say, looks like it left a blank one, sorry for the double post if it did lol
Please continue . You 're doing a great job . Afford to make a suggestion that the introduction is more time consuming , with twists like she was tasting it inside her .
Will you be doing an anal one as well?
ReplyDeleteSorry, probably not this time.
DeleteWhat app did you get to make this with
DeleteHey Eskoz, nice to see your artwork again!
ReplyDeleteFirst off, I really like the new scene! Very sexy once again.
I wanna offer a few points of quick criticism and personal preference (I'm aware that the vaginal part was your focus).
The movement of her wrist looks a bit uncomfortable because of the extreme angle. Also if her arm (the one she is holding him with) would touch the side of her torso and/or rest on her thigh, I think it would put less strain on her shoulder and look more natural.
The insertion-depth feels a little bit shallow to me, he could have been put in a bit further. I would also like a bit of gradual resistance (friction) the further he goes in because it would make her seem less "loose".
I also feel like the elasticity of her vaginal lips could be a bit softer and have a little bit less grip on the inserted, so they "glide off" his body and don't snap back as suddenly. Might make them feel a bit softer overall.
Please don't take my criticism to heart. I'm not complaining, just felt the urge to point these out after, uhm, meditating over your wonderful work for a while...
Hey,
DeleteCriticism is always welcome. I agree with most of your points and some of them I've noticed myself as well. The hands extreme angle particularily was something that caught my eye but I didn't bother to fix it as that would have ment redoing a lot of the animations on the vagina, which was the most time consuming part of this clip. And spot on on the arm position. I didn't really even notice it since I was working through a camera angle where it doesn't show that much.
Insertion depth would have required a different hand pose, as the hand is already clipping with the vagina slightly when close to it. But yes, it would definitely be better with a deeper insertion. I should have probably gone with a pincer grip or something.
As for the friction, I'm not sure if I agree completely on the loose feel, I'd prefer to think that she's just wet. Having said that, having more friction might be more interesting visually. Not to mention the snap back on the ending kind of makes the vagina feel a bit sticky/dry. Although it also gives it a more tight feeling.
I was going for a kind of cartoonish feel on the snap back of the lips. Kind of like in cartoons when characters kiss and the lips stretch and then when parting they immediately snap back to the face, sometimes even propellin the character backwards. Obviously I didn't exagerate the effect nearly that much though, but that was the thought process there. I feel there would have been a lack of impact if the lips just fell slowly back, but this is probably a matter of preference.
Hopefully I didn't come across too defensively, I do appreciate the criticism.
Great to see ya back man!
ReplyDeleteWhat would Ada do if should found smaller people around on or around her toes?
ReplyDeleteThis is excellent! You really seem to know what you are doing around CG.
ReplyDeleteI really liked it and I am glad you've returned to animating. I can't wait to see what else you have planned!
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ReplyDelete#1 glad to see you're alive hehe
ReplyDelete#2 I really like this, and i like what you did with the slight exaggeration for a "cartoony" sort of look as you put it. To me it gives the girl the look of being sort of an innocent girl just having fun and probably not really realizing that her little plaything may not be enjoying this all that much. I like it.
#3 I really hope you decide to do a longer animation with this, show a nice extended scene where she uses her little dildo then tucks it away inside her.
#4 I do like the tiny woman as opposed to the tiny man, i hope you do a F/F version as well ;)
#5 posted a comment right before this, realized there was more i wanted to say, looks like it left a blank one, sorry for the double post if it did lol
Just made my day, Welcome back man ^^ I'm happy to see your work again
ReplyDeletenice wonder what it would look like in her other hole
ReplyDeleteevery thought of having her ride a dildo with a micro strapped to it or a buttplug?
ReplyDeletePlease continue . You 're doing a great job . Afford to make a suggestion that the introduction is more time consuming , with twists like she was tasting it inside her .
ReplyDeleteOne year ago today we realized you weren't dead. Happy anniversary.
ReplyDeleteMake one where she pushes him all the way in
ReplyDeleteMake one where she pushes him all the way in
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